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help with a story?

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i have a story thats kinda based on reality. its just im not that great a writer. its about a a white couple and a black drug dealer and his friend. the couple vists the dealers house. white guy leaves with the dealer to pickup, and the girl and the friend fool around. i have an outline of pretty much the entire story im just no good at the erotic details.

does any one wanna help flesh it out?

is this something that people would like to hear?
 
It would be nice to hear that it was NOT a drug dealer. That crap is going in the hole towards hell so spice it up some by making the black guy something else like a doctor or lawyer or just a normal black man making a living at whatever job he has. Enough with the stereotypes, hell the black race does have persons who are doctors and lawyers. DO NOT GLAMORIZE THE CRIMINAL!!! THAT CRAP IS WHY THEY ARE CRIMINALS TO BEGIN WITH!!!!
 
Literotica.com has editors that can help you develop your story and a writer resource section. So which ever route you choose to go with your ideas this is the site that can help.
 
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