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Pros: Very erotic
Cons: Mary had to leave
A very erotic story. I imagine these two couples went on to have many encounters that included Mary. Would like to hear about those too.
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Thanks for your lovely comments CavScout, it’s appreciated
Pros: superb as always
Always superb - I follow Jen on X (twitter) - Uber Driving Slut - @DrivingSlut.

Either she is a total slut or she has the imagination of a total slut - either way I love her!
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Pros: superb story
Cons: none
loved the whole buildup and discharge
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed, she sure did!
Pros: Well written with story told from all parties involved
Cons: None
This was a very well thought out story with each players views of their actions and the results as the saying goes have consequences.
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Pros: Well written,keeps you engaged.Very hot scene. Nice and descriptive without being over the top or vulgar.
Cons: Too short :)
To show appreciation to the author and encourage others to read it
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Thank you very much. Your attention is appreciated :-)
Love it please continue
Pros: I love how she's having an affair and thinking her husband knows nothing but he knows it all. I finally read part 2 and 3. loved how his PI gathered detailed text messages, phone calls and sex pics of her with the other 2 men. Part 3 actually took a real world approach that i wasn't expecting
Cons: need to read more of the story , I'm hooked on it. Part 2 was great. Part 3 in my opinion took a real life divorce proceeding approach, as for me I like more erotic fantasy and would have had her agreeing to take on more men of her husbands choice and maybe having her doing some strip club dancing. The husband would have only taken the money from the other men to keep there wives from knowing. But then i have a wild imagination LOL.
I love it and hope there's more chapters where she continues the affair and he's allowed to watch them have sex.
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Great story, I think the cops should of had some action also. How do we get your E Book?
One of the best stories I've read in a while. Well done!
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Pros: Great first story opening a lot of room for more in the future
I want the old man to put her on a leash and collar and knock her up!
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Pros: Just love a taboo story, if you have an open minded female in the family then why not, it would be a waste not to ......
Great taboo story, a lot love theses, a lot do not own to loving these mmmmm
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Pros: I can relate..ive had periods in my life when ive been her..willfully..then HAVE to break away..too all consuming!
explained above..also, tne sister piece was appropriate..as my older sister has been my sexual debauchery influencer for over 40 years now!

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Pros: very well written, very erotic, good details
Cons: it had no cons for me
My mother was a BBC addict and I found the story to be very credible and erotic. It brought back memories of watching my mother servicing BBCs
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Pros: I'm unable to get an erection now because of a cancerous prostate removal. I'm with Mike. I love to give a woman oral.
Cons: Lizzy doesn't live next door.
What a great story. I'm very envious of mike.
wholepunch
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Thanks very much for taking the time to review, CavScout - I really appreciate it
That's how a good white slut works a register!
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Pros: Susan fucking black neighbor and having him move in . Making her husband Lisa submissive and sissy wearing lingerie.
Cons: Lisa not wanting Susan to let Jason move in and have a baby. Also him not deciding to be gay and having a relationship with Jason and jason's gay friend.
Loved the story about how Susan was fucking her black neighbor and how her husband got to watch secretively. but i'd leave out the part of Lisa (husbands new sissy name) being upset with Susan about Jason moving in and wanting a new dom female. instead he should accept being gay and his new fem role then having a relationship with jason and jason's gay friend. Then Jason and Susan could have babies and Lisa be the nanny.
This was a reallllllllly good one! Good work!
My wife loves an older man too
Pros: All good
Cons: none, except there should be more
Hot story, nicely told